Robbie Teel                                 Final Paper                  5/5/12Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein may be one of the most analyzed texts in the world. It is this way for good reason, the novel contains innumerable references to other stories or novels. And, Shelley weaves these outside sources together to create a web full of tangential branches that all tie into one master plot. Each one of these branches relates to something different, and can be analyzed in varying means. For instance, one might say that the story is a modern, for the time, rendition of Prometheus. Others might argue that she is writing about “The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner”. Regardless of which story she uses, Shelley has taken elements from many to create a book that allows for hundreds of different paths to be taken in its analysis. One of these novels that she, to use Harris’s term, “forwards”, is Milton’s Paradise Lost. By forwarding, Harris means taking one author’s words or work and changing it and incorporating it into your own thoughts. Shelley can be said to have heavily forwarded both Milton’s work and the holy Bible. Shelly forwards these themes in an intentionally confusing and chaotic way, making her characters’ roles hard to define. Firstly, let me make it clear that this is my analysis of what I think Shelley was writing about. I am also interpreting, or forwarding, the thoughts of Shelley. I feel that a major theme in the novel is Victor being presented as a God figure but actually being more like a devil. I feel that this whole creation, and the chaos that follows, is Shelley’s representation and interpretation of Paradise Lost. The first part of the argument is that Victor is not God, but in fact, a representation of Satan. And  the second argument is that the creation is not necessarily the Satan figure that he is depicted as but rather the Adam of the story.

To start my argument, I’m going to present evidence that would counter my argument about Victor being Satan. The following passage is an example of how one might make the case that Victor is indeed Shelley’s interpreted form of God. Later in this essay, I will prove why this argument is incorrect.


Victor can be seen as God from the start of the creation process to the end. He takes up the role of God and creates life, without a mate. From a scientific standpoint he would be an asexual reproducer. From a Biblical one, he would be creating miracles. This creation of his was Shelley’s play off of the creation of Adam by God. This so called “God” was trying to create a work of beauty. And, in the novel’s start, prior to Frankenstein’s downfall, you feel that this creature will be in his image. In the Bible, Adam is created in the image of his creator, God. And, it’s is easy to argue that the creature is Victor’s Adam, a living being with compassion and rational thought created in the image of it’s maker. Victor, though flawed, is well intentioned in the beginning. While never clearly stated as the reason for his fateful choice to create life, the death of his mother, and his suffering from the loss, may have driven him to experiment with the reanimation of the dead. Had he been a Satanic figure, he would have never attempted such a task. And, reanimation and rebirth are similar ideas, if not synonyms for each other. Jesus, as popularly accepted in the New Testament, rose from the dead. One can argue that this was transferred into the body of the creature, making his creator a Jesus figure, able to give life a second time. The difference is that instead of giving life to himself again he used this second life to create the being that he later will call his “creation”.

While in some respects, as mentioned above, Victor does indeed play God’s role, he is not at all God-like. He is an evil and flawed man. Perhaps evil is too strong a word, but he is far from the benevolent saviour that is the Lord. Shelley created Victor to serve the role as Satan, even if initially one suspects the creation as serving this purpose. But it should become apparent to the reader that, despite his malicious behavior in the middle part of the novel, the real monster is the one who created this evil being. Victor, the real Satan, brought and created the evil monstrous counterpart into the world. He had made a mild mannered being but through his cruelty he turned it into a violent and horrible creature to be despised by all. If this isn’t evil, frankly, I don’t know what is. The creation’s actions, though terrible and severe, were all by products of the hatred produced by Victor Frankenstein. This will be discussed in more depth in a later part of the essay.


To change subject for a moment, I am going to skip ahead to talking about the creature’s role as a protagonist. It is not to say that Victor isn’t a protagonist but as I view the protagonist as being a good being, as opposed to an evil one, I’m going to use the creature to play this part. And, since the case has been made that Victor isn’t God, we need a God-like character. The creation isn’t God either, but instead plays the product of the Lord. And, if you were to believe that the Lord made us in his own image, then this image would be a humanized form of God. This would be, naturally, Adam.

The Monster, or Creation as it should justly be called, is more of an Adam than a Satan. He is referred to as a “demon” by his satanic creator, Victor. Despite the fact that it is described as a demon or devil, Victor is the  actual mortal enemy of his own child, the being he brought into the world. Victor also plays the role of Lucifer, fighting to destroy his mortal foe. Just as Adam is the object of Satan’s hatred, his target or victim of his devilishness, the Creation is the unfortunate victim of his creator’s loathing. And, just as Satan is predisposed to destroy and utterly ruin his enemy, God, in the only form he can attack him, Adam, Victor is equally set on the destruction of his “Adam”, the Creation.  Despite his downfall and transformation into a monster, the creation never once says that he hates Victor. Victor, being the true monster in the novel, states his hatred for his creation many times. This is roughly comparable to Adam’s lack of hatred towards any being, whereas Satan completely abominates anything related to the Lord.

Ignoring, for just a moment, the above argument, the creature actually has an unclear role in Shelley’s book. Perhaps I should clarify, she makes one think that the creature is both Adam and Satan. There are times when it is easy to see the creation as both characters simultaneously. I personally believe that he is the Adam figure in the novel as I will explain below.  An interesting passage in the book supports my argument. On pages 116 and 117 of the novel, the creation questions whether he is Satan or if he is Adam:
“….Like Adam, I was apparently united by no link to any other being in existence; but his state was far different from mine in every other respect. He had come forth from the hands of God a perfect creature, happy and prosperous, guarded by the especial care of his Creator; he was allowed to converse with, and acquire knowledge from, beings of a superior nature: but I was wretched, helpless, and alone. Many times I considered Satan as the fitter emblem of my condition; for often, like him, when I viewed the bliss of my protectors, the bitter gall of envy rose within me.

Following the discovery and reading of Paradise Lost the creature begins to question his identity, as Adam does. But the fact that he is able to distinguish between his situation and that of Satan’s shows that he is not pure of spirit, or at least doesn’t think he is. As the creature will later learn, he has reason to be unsure of his position as he’ll do unspeakable things that can make him appear to be a Satan figure. The creature is, as mentioned above, Adam. He is the being that has been created by his “God”.  To stray from track for a moment, one can argue that the creation might even be the personified Jesus, as he was reborn. For the intent of this argument however, this issue will not be discussed. Like Adam, the creature is basically good. Later in the novel, like Adam, the creature asks for a female companion, implying that the creature is a male, a fact never explicitly mentioned. And, the female companion is made in a similar manner, though not from the rib of it’s “Adam”. To add to the Adam and Eve story, the female companion is destroyed by the creator. This destruction can be looked at two different ways. The first is the sadness felt by the creature could rival Adam’s feeling when cast out of Eden. The monster, or creature, feels betrayed by Victor upon learning that his “mate” was destroyed. Adam, though not explicitly, feels like Eve is responsible for their eternal banishment from Eden and Paradise. Also, the destruction could symbolize the forced removal from Eden, following the eating of the forbidden apple. While Eve wasn’t destroyed, the world of peace and perfection was destroyed for them. It was destroyed in the sense that they could never have it again. And Victor’s creation, the creature, could never have a partner or a romantic link. The second way is how the creature’s world unravels after his mate is destroyed. Like Adam, the paradise he knew was permanently taken from him, his Eve was to be his Eden, or his retreat from the abuses of the world. Following the exile from Eden, or the destruction of a partner, the Adam figures start to live a much more difficult life. Instead of having all they wanted, Adam and Eve’s mecca and safe haven; the monster’s troubles eased by having someone to share them with, they are left bereft and bare. The creature is left to fend for himself without any other being to share his misery. He is forced into the cruel world alone and without anyone of his kind. Adam and Eve are kicked out of a life of ease and luxury and are sent to the rest of the world, where hardship and suffering exist.


From another standpoint, the creature could be described as Satan. This is because he suffers a downfall. Arguably, Victor can be described as Lucifer as well, which will be addressed shortly. The creation starts out the story as a kind and benevolent being. Satan, or Lucifer as he is known, was too a kind being. He was, according to both the Bible and Milton, an arc- angel. This is like calling him God’s right hand man, a very important and respected being. As it is commonly known, Lucifer tried to rise up against God and rivaled him for power. The creature even challenges the creator directly. On page 146 in the novel the creature says this: “You are my creator, but I am your master;–Obey!” This utterance foreshadows the creature’s development into Satan. Some argue that he is more powerful than the Lord, who was unable to destroy him. Regardless, Lucifer, or Satan, was cast from Heaven along with his followers and sent to the pit of eternal suffering, Hell. This dark and fiery wasteland became the home of Satan and is where he began to plot the revenge he’d extract against the Lord himself.  The creation has his own downfall. He asks his creator, demands really, for it is a stronger word, to create a mate for him. It also rises against Victor indirectly, by killing his brother and later fiance. The creator casts him to hell right away. In fact, he casts the creature to “hell” before it even rises against him. When he abandons his creation, leaving it at the mercy of humankind and the brutal reality of the real world, Victor has, in theory, sentenced the creation to Hell. It is in response to this abuse faced at the hands of the world, mostly due to Victor’s abandonment, that the creature rises against his master and becomes “Satan”. The creature becomes the demon that his master describes him as. And, like the Biblical Satan, it does unspeakable things to get a reaction from the “God” figure. In this story, he kills Frankenstein’s friends and family. In Paradise Lost Satan destroys Adam and Eve a different way. He tricks Eve into eating the forbidden fruit, an apple, knowing that she’d be cast out of Eden. Once this event took place, Adam and Eve became mortal, meaning that, eventually, they’d die. So in essence, Satan killed them in a response to his casting out of Heaven. As both the Bible and Milton show, Satan begins to thrive in this “Hell”. And Shelley’s Satan figure, the creation, also does quite well in his miserable hovels in the mountains of Germany and Switzerland.

It seems to me, however, that despite the valid argument made above, the creature is mostly good. It has feelings and regrets.  It is more like the Adam, making mistakes but unlike Satan, not deriving pleasure from the sins. The creation feels terribly when it behaves in the monstrous manner, something that Satan wouldn’t feel. In fact, the Satan in the novel, Victor, seems more intent on destruction than the creation ever did. In the end it forgives it’s mortal enemy, Victor, and helps Victor out by destroying itself at the novel’s end. It proves to be a benevolent being in the final chapter, as it begins it’s life in the novel upon it’s initial creation. Had Shelley intended the creation to be a true monster, she would have written a different ending, an ending with a violent malicious creature, the monster, living it’s life out in the northern ice flows, preying upon passers by. This may not be accurate but essentially, Shelley wouldn’t have made the creation a being that one can emphasize with had she wanted it to be truly evil. In fact, towards the end, one feels more for the creature than for Victor. And, unless I’m greatly mistaken in my reasoning, one does not tend to sympathize with the evil figure.


Working from the need of a Satan figure in a novel that forwards Paradise Lost,  as the creation is Adam, Shelley may have used Victor to represent Satan instead of the creature to play the role. As mentioned earlier on, Victor is also playing God’s role, though he is far from the God that is in the Bible. Unlike the benevolent Lord written about in both the Bible and in Milton’s work, Victor is a malevolent being with a God-complex. God complexes are like any other type of complex, a psychological problem. Complexes are often seen in people who are obsessive about one thing. In this case, Victor is obsessed with the idea that he can create life. In the book, on page 53, this can be seen when Victor says: “…. more, far more, will I achieve: treading in the steps already marked, I will pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of creation.” To stray from track for a moment, it can also be said that Victor represents a Greek tragic hero. He has excessive hubris, thinking that he can play God, and therefore is punished for it.  The above quote is also representative of his large ego.

As for the aspect of him being Satan, Victor became the devil, he didn’t start out this way. This brings us to the issue that perhaps God and Satan are one and the same, as Victor is  shown as both. However, due to the complexities of this argument, it will remain untouched. Victor can be the Satan figure, corrupting the innocent Adam, and creating a less savoury being in his place. Or one can look at how Victor started out good, trying to create life to bring his mother back, as is implied, never stated; and then suffered a downfall, his exile from Heaven, and became a monster himself. The second idea is more logical and will be treated as the reason for why Frankenstein may be Satan. He starts out, as previously stated, a good person. The reasoning behind his creation of life is never stated but it is implied that he may want to bring his mother back from the dead. His downfall occurs when he sets about his task of creation. When he does this, it represents his challenge to God, as he tries to become just as powerful as Him. As mentioned earlier, the quote from page fifty three, where Victor says he is going to achieve new levels, supports this. By saying how he will go where no man has gone before, he is saying that he is above man and that he is treading on materials that aren’t meant for mortal men. This is almost like Victor being subtle while directly challenging God.  Satan says in Milton’s work: “…better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.” To me, as the reader, this is Satan’s challenge to the Lord’s authority. Victor lives in a self created Hell and it seems that he’d rather defy the laws of nature and of God than just accept them. Victor creates life as only the Omnipotent could, and makes himself rival God in power, perhaps even making a statement that he is more powerful than the Lord. In turn, Victor is cast from his proverbial Heaven.  His Heaven,  a home by the calm gentle waters of the lake where he lives at peace with his family, this idyllic life, is shattered by his brash actions and my his attempt to play God. This downfall is when Victor’s loved ones start to suffer the wrath of the creation. His beloved younger brother and finally his fiance are murdered by the creation, though it can be argued that Victor killed them himself,  but obviously not directly. In the end, Victor is left dejected and monstrous, setting his life upon the destruction of his creation. Like Satan, Victor wants nothing more than to destroy his mortal enemy, (God in the form of Adam; the creation) and will stop at nothing to do so. The creation, unlike Victor doesn’t share these sentiments. In fact, Victor is pleased with himself following his destruction of the creation’s mate. On the contrary, the creation never once feels any joy, at least any lasting joy, from the destruction of the lives he took.  In Milton’s book, Satan dedicates his life to trying to extract his revenge upon God, playing the theory that perhaps the monster is God. An interesting theory no doubt but one that is saved for another time perhaps.


There are certainly flaws in my argument. As I showed above, there are many arguments than can be made against mine. That said, for the reasons I showed I feel that I am correct in my interpretation. And part of creating an argument is setting up for someone to disprove it at a later date. So, regardless of what you as a reader feel is correct, I have simply presented my case in a manner that I feel serves my opinion justice. In fairness, Shelley created a work that is open to interpretation by a variety of means and that there is no one exact answer.


As mentioned earlier, there is no correct answer to this problem. This is partially why Mary Shelley’s work is still being discussed and analyzed to this day. No one is able to figure out who is the God figure and who is Satan, though as I have explained, the roles are easily disputed but I think that I am in the right.  Likewise, there are many other characters from other novels referenced and alluded to that they could be instead. The whole story it can be argued, as based on the supporting evidence from the above argument, is a forwarding of both the Bible and Paradise Lost. As mentioned earlier, forwarding is the act of taking one writer’s work and putting it into your own words, with your own twist and analysis of it. In this case, Shelley took two great religious books and changed the story into her own interpretation of it. By simply changing the character’s names and story slightly, she retold Genesis in her own unique manner. She may have had strong religious opinions and this was her way to safely express them without simply questioning who is God and who is Satan. She may even have been implying that God and Satan are the same or that they can be interchangeable, as can be seen when Victor and the creation switch roles of who plays Satan’s figure. And Shelley works these plots into her story. She puts a story within a story and lets the reader do the work of unravelling the various scenarios. A major theme of this novel is confusion and chaos and by writing in this twisting and unclear manner she is able to create this illusion. This way she intentionally incorporates famous works into her story for a result that can be read to this day. And by forwarding her opinions, she is able to create debates, discussions, interpretations, and also, allow herself to be published by the stricter Victorian censors. Above all, the story’s confusing character roles, the questions of who is who leads to a story that draws in the reader’s attentions and adds to the mystique and legend of the Frankenstein novel.

Robbie Teel                                 Final Paper                  5/5/12

Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein may be one of the most analyzed texts in the world. It is this way for good reason, the novel contains innumerable references to other stories or novels. And, Shelley weaves these outside sources together to create a web full of tangential branches that all tie into one master plot. Each one of these branches relates to something different, and can be analyzed in varying means. For instance, one might say that the story is a modern, for the time, rendition of Prometheus. Others might argue that she is writing about “The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner”. Regardless of which story she uses, Shelley has taken elements from many to create a book that allows for hundreds of different paths to be taken in its analysis. One of these novels that she, to use Harris’s term, “forwards”, is Milton’s Paradise Lost. By forwarding, Harris means taking one author’s words or work and changing it and incorporating it into your own thoughts. Shelley can be said to have heavily forwarded both Milton’s work and the holy Bible. Shelly forwards these themes in an intentionally confusing and chaotic way, making her characters’ roles hard to define. Firstly, let me make it clear that this is my analysis of what I think Shelley was writing about. I am also interpreting, or forwarding, the thoughts of Shelley. I feel that a major theme in the novel is Victor being presented as a God figure but actually being more like a devil. I feel that this whole creation, and the chaos that follows, is Shelley’s representation and interpretation of Paradise Lost. The first part of the argument is that Victor is not God, but in fact, a representation of Satan. And  the second argument is that the creation is not necessarily the Satan figure that he is depicted as but rather the Adam of the story.

To start my argument, I’m going to present evidence that would counter my argument about Victor being Satan. The following passage is an example of how one might make the case that Victor is indeed Shelley’s interpreted form of God. Later in this essay, I will prove why this argument is incorrect.


Victor can be seen as God from the start of the creation process to the end. He takes up the role of God and creates life, without a mate. From a scientific standpoint he would be an asexual reproducer. From a Biblical one, he would be creating miracles. This creation of his was Shelley’s play off of the creation of Adam by God. This so called “God” was trying to create a work of beauty. And, in the novel’s start, prior to Frankenstein’s downfall, you feel that this creature will be in his image. In the Bible, Adam is created in the image of his creator, God. And, it’s is easy to argue that the creature is Victor’s Adam, a living being with compassion and rational thought created in the image of it’s maker. Victor, though flawed, is well intentioned in the beginning. While never clearly stated as the reason for his fateful choice to create life, the death of his mother, and his suffering from the loss, may have driven him to experiment with the reanimation of the dead. Had he been a Satanic figure, he would have never attempted such a task. And, reanimation and rebirth are similar ideas, if not synonyms for each other. Jesus, as popularly accepted in the New Testament, rose from the dead. One can argue that this was transferred into the body of the creature, making his creator a Jesus figure, able to give life a second time. The difference is that instead of giving life to himself again he used this second life to create the being that he later will call his “creation”.

While in some respects, as mentioned above, Victor does indeed play God’s role, he is not at all God-like. He is an evil and flawed man. Perhaps evil is too strong a word, but he is far from the benevolent saviour that is the Lord. Shelley created Victor to serve the role as Satan, even if initially one suspects the creation as serving this purpose. But it should become apparent to the reader that, despite his malicious behavior in the middle part of the novel, the real monster is the one who created this evil being. Victor, the real Satan, brought and created the evil monstrous counterpart into the world. He had made a mild mannered being but through his cruelty he turned it into a violent and horrible creature to be despised by all. If this isn’t evil, frankly, I don’t know what is. The creation’s actions, though terrible and severe, were all by products of the hatred produced by Victor Frankenstein. This will be discussed in more depth in a later part of the essay.


To change subject for a moment, I am going to skip ahead to talking about the creature’s role as a protagonist. It is not to say that Victor isn’t a protagonist but as I view the protagonist as being a good being, as opposed to an evil one, I’m going to use the creature to play this part. And, since the case has been made that Victor isn’t God, we need a God-like character. The creation isn’t God either, but instead plays the product of the Lord. And, if you were to believe that the Lord made us in his own image, then this image would be a humanized form of God. This would be, naturally, Adam.

The Monster, or Creation as it should justly be called, is more of an Adam than a Satan. He is referred to as a “demon” by his satanic creator, Victor. Despite the fact that it is described as a demon or devil, Victor is the  actual mortal enemy of his own child, the being he brought into the world. Victor also plays the role of Lucifer, fighting to destroy his mortal foe. Just as Adam is the object of Satan’s hatred, his target or victim of his devilishness, the Creation is the unfortunate victim of his creator’s loathing. And, just as Satan is predisposed to destroy and utterly ruin his enemy, God, in the only form he can attack him, Adam, Victor is equally set on the destruction of his “Adam”, the Creation.  Despite his downfall and transformation into a monster, the creation never once says that he hates Victor. Victor, being the true monster in the novel, states his hatred for his creation many times. This is roughly comparable to Adam’s lack of hatred towards any being, whereas Satan completely abominates anything related to the Lord.

Ignoring, for just a moment, the above argument, the creature actually has an unclear role in Shelley’s book. Perhaps I should clarify, she makes one think that the creature is both Adam and Satan. There are times when it is easy to see the creation as both characters simultaneously. I personally believe that he is the Adam figure in the novel as I will explain below.  An interesting passage in the book supports my argument. On pages 116 and 117 of the novel, the creation questions whether he is Satan or if he is Adam:
“….Like Adam, I was apparently united by no link to any other being in existence; but his state was far different from mine in every other respect. He had come forth from the hands of God a perfect creature, happy and prosperous, guarded by the especial care of his Creator; he was allowed to converse with, and acquire knowledge from, beings of a superior nature: but I was wretched, helpless, and alone. Many times I considered Satan as the fitter emblem of my condition; for often, like him, when I viewed the bliss of my protectors, the bitter gall of envy rose within me.

Following the discovery and reading of Paradise Lost the creature begins to question his identity, as Adam does. But the fact that he is able to distinguish between his situation and that of Satan’s shows that he is not pure of spirit, or at least doesn’t think he is. As the creature will later learn, he has reason to be unsure of his position as he’ll do unspeakable things that can make him appear to be a Satan figure. The creature is, as mentioned above, Adam. He is the being that has been created by his “God”.  To stray from track for a moment, one can argue that the creation might even be the personified Jesus, as he was reborn. For the intent of this argument however, this issue will not be discussed. Like Adam, the creature is basically good. Later in the novel, like Adam, the creature asks for a female companion, implying that the creature is a male, a fact never explicitly mentioned. And, the female companion is made in a similar manner, though not from the rib of it’s “Adam”. To add to the Adam and Eve story, the female companion is destroyed by the creator. This destruction can be looked at two different ways. The first is the sadness felt by the creature could rival Adam’s feeling when cast out of Eden. The monster, or creature, feels betrayed by Victor upon learning that his “mate” was destroyed. Adam, though not explicitly, feels like Eve is responsible for their eternal banishment from Eden and Paradise. Also, the destruction could symbolize the forced removal from Eden, following the eating of the forbidden apple. While Eve wasn’t destroyed, the world of peace and perfection was destroyed for them. It was destroyed in the sense that they could never have it again. And Victor’s creation, the creature, could never have a partner or a romantic link. The second way is how the creature’s world unravels after his mate is destroyed. Like Adam, the paradise he knew was permanently taken from him, his Eve was to be his Eden, or his retreat from the abuses of the world. Following the exile from Eden, or the destruction of a partner, the Adam figures start to live a much more difficult life. Instead of having all they wanted, Adam and Eve’s mecca and safe haven; the monster’s troubles eased by having someone to share them with, they are left bereft and bare. The creature is left to fend for himself without any other being to share his misery. He is forced into the cruel world alone and without anyone of his kind. Adam and Eve are kicked out of a life of ease and luxury and are sent to the rest of the world, where hardship and suffering exist.


From another standpoint, the creature could be described as Satan. This is because he suffers a downfall. Arguably, Victor can be described as Lucifer as well, which will be addressed shortly. The creation starts out the story as a kind and benevolent being. Satan, or Lucifer as he is known, was too a kind being. He was, according to both the Bible and Milton, an arc- angel. This is like calling him God’s right hand man, a very important and respected being. As it is commonly known, Lucifer tried to rise up against God and rivaled him for power. The creature even challenges the creator directly. On page 146 in the novel the creature says this: “You are my creator, but I am your master;–Obey!” This utterance foreshadows the creature’s development into Satan. Some argue that he is more powerful than the Lord, who was unable to destroy him. Regardless, Lucifer, or Satan, was cast from Heaven along with his followers and sent to the pit of eternal suffering, Hell. This dark and fiery wasteland became the home of Satan and is where he began to plot the revenge he’d extract against the Lord himself.  The creation has his own downfall. He asks his creator, demands really, for it is a stronger word, to create a mate for him. It also rises against Victor indirectly, by killing his brother and later fiance. The creator casts him to hell right away. In fact, he casts the creature to “hell” before it even rises against him. When he abandons his creation, leaving it at the mercy of humankind and the brutal reality of the real world, Victor has, in theory, sentenced the creation to Hell. It is in response to this abuse faced at the hands of the world, mostly due to Victor’s abandonment, that the creature rises against his master and becomes “Satan”. The creature becomes the demon that his master describes him as. And, like the Biblical Satan, it does unspeakable things to get a reaction from the “God” figure. In this story, he kills Frankenstein’s friends and family. In Paradise Lost Satan destroys Adam and Eve a different way. He tricks Eve into eating the forbidden fruit, an apple, knowing that she’d be cast out of Eden. Once this event took place, Adam and Eve became mortal, meaning that, eventually, they’d die. So in essence, Satan killed them in a response to his casting out of Heaven. As both the Bible and Milton show, Satan begins to thrive in this “Hell”. And Shelley’s Satan figure, the creation, also does quite well in his miserable hovels in the mountains of Germany and Switzerland.

It seems to me, however, that despite the valid argument made above, the creature is mostly good. It has feelings and regrets.  It is more like the Adam, making mistakes but unlike Satan, not deriving pleasure from the sins. The creation feels terribly when it behaves in the monstrous manner, something that Satan wouldn’t feel. In fact, the Satan in the novel, Victor, seems more intent on destruction than the creation ever did. In the end it forgives it’s mortal enemy, Victor, and helps Victor out by destroying itself at the novel’s end. It proves to be a benevolent being in the final chapter, as it begins it’s life in the novel upon it’s initial creation. Had Shelley intended the creation to be a true monster, she would have written a different ending, an ending with a violent malicious creature, the monster, living it’s life out in the northern ice flows, preying upon passers by. This may not be accurate but essentially, Shelley wouldn’t have made the creation a being that one can emphasize with had she wanted it to be truly evil. In fact, towards the end, one feels more for the creature than for Victor. And, unless I’m greatly mistaken in my reasoning, one does not tend to sympathize with the evil figure.


Working from the need of a Satan figure in a novel that forwards Paradise Lost,  as the creation is Adam, Shelley may have used Victor to represent Satan instead of the creature to play the role. As mentioned earlier on, Victor is also playing God’s role, though he is far from the God that is in the Bible. Unlike the benevolent Lord written about in both the Bible and in Milton’s work, Victor is a malevolent being with a God-complex. God complexes are like any other type of complex, a psychological problem. Complexes are often seen in people who are obsessive about one thing. In this case, Victor is obsessed with the idea that he can create life. In the book, on page 53, this can be seen when Victor says: “…. more, far more, will I achieve: treading in the steps already marked, I will pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of creation.” To stray from track for a moment, it can also be said that Victor represents a Greek tragic hero. He has excessive hubris, thinking that he can play God, and therefore is punished for it.  The above quote is also representative of his large ego.

As for the aspect of him being Satan, Victor became the devil, he didn’t start out this way. This brings us to the issue that perhaps God and Satan are one and the same, as Victor is  shown as both. However, due to the complexities of this argument, it will remain untouched. Victor can be the Satan figure, corrupting the innocent Adam, and creating a less savoury being in his place. Or one can look at how Victor started out good, trying to create life to bring his mother back, as is implied, never stated; and then suffered a downfall, his exile from Heaven, and became a monster himself. The second idea is more logical and will be treated as the reason for why Frankenstein may be Satan. He starts out, as previously stated, a good person. The reasoning behind his creation of life is never stated but it is implied that he may want to bring his mother back from the dead. His downfall occurs when he sets about his task of creation. When he does this, it represents his challenge to God, as he tries to become just as powerful as Him. As mentioned earlier, the quote from page fifty three, where Victor says he is going to achieve new levels, supports this. By saying how he will go where no man has gone before, he is saying that he is above man and that he is treading on materials that aren’t meant for mortal men. This is almost like Victor being subtle while directly challenging God.  Satan says in Milton’s work: “…better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.” To me, as the reader, this is Satan’s challenge to the Lord’s authority. Victor lives in a self created Hell and it seems that he’d rather defy the laws of nature and of God than just accept them. Victor creates life as only the Omnipotent could, and makes himself rival God in power, perhaps even making a statement that he is more powerful than the Lord. In turn, Victor is cast from his proverbial Heaven.  His Heaven,  a home by the calm gentle waters of the lake where he lives at peace with his family, this idyllic life, is shattered by his brash actions and my his attempt to play God. This downfall is when Victor’s loved ones start to suffer the wrath of the creation. His beloved younger brother and finally his fiance are murdered by the creation, though it can be argued that Victor killed them himself,  but obviously not directly. In the end, Victor is left dejected and monstrous, setting his life upon the destruction of his creation. Like Satan, Victor wants nothing more than to destroy his mortal enemy, (God in the form of Adam; the creation) and will stop at nothing to do so. The creation, unlike Victor doesn’t share these sentiments. In fact, Victor is pleased with himself following his destruction of the creation’s mate. On the contrary, the creation never once feels any joy, at least any lasting joy, from the destruction of the lives he took.  In Milton’s book, Satan dedicates his life to trying to extract his revenge upon God, playing the theory that perhaps the monster is God. An interesting theory no doubt but one that is saved for another time perhaps.


There are certainly flaws in my argument. As I showed above, there are many arguments than can be made against mine. That said, for the reasons I showed I feel that I am correct in my interpretation. And part of creating an argument is setting up for someone to disprove it at a later date. So, regardless of what you as a reader feel is correct, I have simply presented my case in a manner that I feel serves my opinion justice. In fairness, Shelley created a work that is open to interpretation by a variety of means and that there is no one exact answer.


As mentioned earlier, there is no correct answer to this problem. This is partially why Mary Shelley’s work is still being discussed and analyzed to this day. No one is able to figure out who is the God figure and who is Satan, though as I have explained, the roles are easily disputed but I think that I am in the right.  Likewise, there are many other characters from other novels referenced and alluded to that they could be instead. The whole story it can be argued, as based on the supporting evidence from the above argument, is a forwarding of both the Bible and Paradise Lost. As mentioned earlier, forwarding is the act of taking one writer’s work and putting it into your own words, with your own twist and analysis of it. In this case, Shelley took two great religious books and changed the story into her own interpretation of it. By simply changing the character’s names and story slightly, she retold Genesis in her own unique manner. She may have had strong religious opinions and this was her way to safely express them without simply questioning who is God and who is Satan. She may even have been implying that God and Satan are the same or that they can be interchangeable, as can be seen when Victor and the creation switch roles of who plays Satan’s figure. And Shelley works these plots into her story. She puts a story within a story and lets the reader do the work of unravelling the various scenarios. A major theme of this novel is confusion and chaos and by writing in this twisting and unclear manner she is able to create this illusion. This way she intentionally incorporates famous works into her story for a result that can be read to this day. And by forwarding her opinions, she is able to create debates, discussions, interpretations, and also, allow herself to be published by the stricter Victorian censors. Above all, the story’s confusing character roles, the questions of who is who leads to a story that draws in the reader’s attentions and adds to the mystique and legend of the Frankenstein novel.

Robbie Teel                 Final Paper, English 101                     5/6/12

I chose to revise and improve my second paper. This paper, in my opinion, and, frankly, according to the grade book, was my best. I thought that I could take the project even further, expanding upon it. Instead of just simply adding to my argument, I took a cue from the third writing assignment, the use of an effective counter argument. I felt that as this was a final project I should incorporate what I’ve learned into my writing. What I did, for the sake of conciseness, was change my thesis. With this done, I had to take a stance, portraying my argument in a different light. Instead of just changing the argument’s meaning by having a new thesis, I expanded my argument by using the things I learned from counter argument. For one, I went into the paper, originally just about deep reading, and combined the aspect of counter argument with critical reading.
Basically, I looked into my paper as deeply as I could, I did my own interpretation of what Shelley had in mind in her story. This was done in the original rendition of the paper. Going back, I changed my stance to argue that Frankenstein was Satan and Adam was played by the creation. I then gave evidence for this, using the original paper as well as incorporating fresh material and thought into the matter. The original paper was not much of an argument. For one, though it had strong cases, it had no set side. There was no argument essentially. It was simply a neutral standpoint that showed all the possible sides. When I re-wrote the paper, I included a stance, giving the argument a meaning and making it a valid argument. Now I had a side, and I proved it. This strengthened my case greatly I feel. My new insights and thoughts also played a contributing role in the paper.
As I learned in doing the third paper, an argument has to have a solid position. Neutral stances are good for presenting information, but for nothing more. This was my intent, to come up with an argument, defend it, and present it as fact.
I feel that I’ve improved in my writing. As the year progressed, my writing became stronger and stronger. This paper, in my opinion, is proof of that. While it may not be good in the eyes of literary critics, I am proud of it. My reasoning for pride is in that I feel that this paper displays my improvement in writing. It also emcompasses all that I’ve learned. I think that by combining two different methods of writing, the second and third papers (critical reading and counter argument), it demonstrates that I’ve learned how to write more effectively and more skillfully. The three assignments throughout the semester have been expecting us to build upon what we’ve learned and use them in the paper. For instance, the second paper should have been using the materials in the first paper as well as the new method being taught, and the third using the second paper and new stuff, et cetera. I feel that this one has built upon the semester’s worth of writing assignments, using all the things I’ve learned and blending them.
I feel that I have accomplished much. Generally, my writing has improved. I also believe that I’ve learned how to both think and write more critically, an invaluable tool for sure. One thing that I will continue to learn and to work on is my arguments. I still need to practice and work with the development and progression of an argument. I’m improving but there is always room for more improvement. Another thing that I would like to get better at is transitioning and ending. Sometimes I feel that I continue to ramble on and on without ever just ending it. I think I need to learn how to say more without saying so much. To explain, I need to learn to be more concise and end writing when I’m done, instead of just spewing out more and more unneeded information. And as for transitions, sometimes I will have a bunch of paragraphs that should be combined and others that should be split off. I often struggle with this and found that as I edited my final paper I had to redo some of the paragraphs and structure of the essay so that it flowed better. I have three years at Washington College left to improve and expand upon what I know in terms of my writing. I’m not worried that I won’t learn, three years will lead to much more improvement.
I think this portfolio displays all that I’ve learned throughout the semester of English. I also feel that it can show the changes in my writing as I’ve learned how to make an argument and how to expand upon what is already there. I think the portfolio is a great representation of how I’ve advanced in my writing as I have started to combine all the elements essential for a paper into one final work. If nothing else, I’ve been given another chance to practice my skills and plan to continue to expand and improve my writing prowess in the coming years.

Robbie Teel                                 Response Paper #2                   3/13/12

Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein may be one of the most analyzed texts in the world. It is this way for good reason, the novel contains innumerable references to other stories or novels. And, Shelley weaves these outside sources together to create a web full of tangential branches that all tie into one master plot. Each one of these branches relates to something different, and can be analyzed in varying means. For instance, one might say that the story is a modern, for the time, rendition of Prometheus. Others might argue that she is writing about “The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner”. Regardless of which story she uses, Shelley has taken elements from many to create a book that allows for hundreds of different paths to be taken in its analysis. One of these novels that she, to use Harris’s term, “forwards”, is Milton’s Paradise Lost. By forwarding, Harris means taking one author’s words or work and changing it and incorporating it into your own thoughts. Shelley can be said to have heavily forwarded both Milton’s work and the holy Bible. Shelly forwards these themes in an intentionally confusing and chaotic way, making her characters’ roles hard to define. Firstly, let me make it clear that this is my analysis of what I think Shelley was writing about. I am also interpreting, or forwarding, the thoughts of Shelley. I feel that a major theme in the novel is Victor being a God figure. I feel that this whole creation, and the chaos that follows, is Shelley’s representation and interpretation of Paradise Lost.
The first part of the argument is that Victor is a representation of God and of Satan. And  the second argument is that the creation is both Adam and Satan.

Victor can be seen as God from the start of the creation process to the end. Unlike the benevolent Lord written about in both the Bible and in Milton’s work, Victor is a malevolent being with a God-complex. God complexes are like any other type of complex, a psychological problem. Complexes are often seen in people who are obsessive about one thing. In this case, Victor is obsessed with the idea that he can create life. In the book, on page 53, this can be seen when Victor says: “…. more, far more, will I achieve: treading in the steps already marked, I will pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of creation.” To stray from track for a moment, it can also be said that Victor represents a Greek tragic hero. He has excessive hubris, thinking that he can play God, and therefore is punished for it.  The above quote is also representative of his large ego. But he takes up the role of God and creates life, without a mate. From a scientific standpoint he would be an asexual reproducer. From a Biblical one, he would be creating miracles. This creation of his was Shelley’s play off of the creation of Adam by God. This so called “God” was trying to create a work of beauty. And, in the novel’s start, prior to Frankenstein’s downfall, you feel that this creature will be in his image. In the Bible, Adam is created in the image of his creator, God. And, it’s is easy to argue that the creature is Victor’s Adam, a living being with compassion and rational thought created in the image of it’s maker.

The creature has an unclear role in Shelley’s book. She makes one think that the creature is both Adam and Satan. An interesting passage in the book supports my argument. On pages 116 and 117 of the novel, the creation questions whether he is Satan or if he is Adam:
“….Like Adam, I was apparently united by no link to any other being in existence; but his state was far different from mine in every other respect. He had come forth from the hands of God a perfect creature, happy and prosperous, guarded by the especial care of his Creator; he was allowed to converse with, and acquire knowledge from, beings of a superior nature: but I was wretched, helpless, and alone. Many times I considered Satan as the fitter emblem of my condition; for often, like him, when I viewed the bliss of my protectors, the bitter gall of envy rose within me.
Following the discovery and reading of Paradise Lost the creature begins to question his identity, as Adam does. But the fact that he is able to distinguish between his situation and that of Satan’s shows that he is not pure of spirit, or at least doesn’t think he is. As the creature will later learn, he has reason to be unsure of his position as he’ll prove to be both Adam and Satan. The creature is, as mentioned above, Adam. He is the being that has been created by his “God”.  Like Adam, the creature is basically good. Later in the novel, like Adam, the creature asks for a female companion, implying that the creature is a male, a fact never explicitly mentioned. And, the female companion is made in a similar manner, though not from the rib of it’s “Adam”. To add to the Adam and Eve story, the female companion is destroyed by the creator. This destruction can be looked at two different ways. The first is the sadness felt by the creature could rival Adam’s feeling when cast out of Eden. The monster, or creature, feels betrayed by Victor upon learning that his “mate” was destroyed. Adam, though not explicitly, feels like Eve is responsible for their eternal banishment from Eden and Paradise. Also, the destruction could symbolize the forced removal from Eden, following the eating of the forbidden apple. While Eve wasn’t destroyed, the world of peace and perfection was destroyed for them. It was destroyed in the sense that they could never have it again. And Victor’s creation, the creature, could never have a partner or a romantic link. The second way is how the creature’s world unravels after his mate is destroyed. Like Adam, the paradise he knew was permanently taken from him, his Eve was to be his Eden, or his retreat from the abuses of the world. Following the exile from Eden, or the destruction of a partner, the Adam figures start to live a much more difficult life. Instead of having all they wanted, Adam and Eve’s mecca and safe haven; the monster’s troubles eased by having someone to share them with, they are left bereft and bare. The creature is left to fend for himself without any other being to share his misery. He is forced into the cruel world alone and without anyone of his kind. Adam and Eve are kicked out of a life of ease and luxury and are sent to the rest of the world, where hardship and suffering exist.

From another standpoint, the creature could be described as Satan. This is because he suffers a downfall. Arguably, Victor can be described as Lucifer as well, which will be addressed shortly. The creation starts out the story as a kind and benevolent being. Satan, or Lucifer as he is known, was too a kind being. He was, according to both the Bible and Milton, an arc- angel. This is like calling him God’s right hand man, a very important and respected being. As it is commonly known, Lucifer tried to rise up against God and rivaled him for power. The creature even challenges the creator directly. On page 146 in the novel the creature says this: “You are my creator, but I am your master;–Obey!” This utterance foreshadows the creature’s development into Satan. Some argue that he is more powerful than the Lord, who was unable to destroy him. Regardless, Lucifer, or Satan, was cast from Heaven along with his followers and sent to the pit of eternal suffering, Hell. This dark and fiery wasteland became the home of Satan and is where he began to plot the revenge he’d extract against the Lord himself.  The creation has his own downfall. He asks his creator, demands really, for it is a stronger word, to create a mate for him. It also rises against Victor indirectly, by killing his brother and later fiance. The creator casts him to hell right away. In fact, he casts the creature to “hell” before it even rises against him. When he abandons his creation, leaving it at the mercy of humankind and the brutal reality of the real world, Victor has, in theory, sentenced the creation to Hell. It is in response to this abuse faced at the hands of the world, mostly due to Victor’s abandonment, that the creature rises against his master and becomes “Satan”. The creature becomes the demon that his master describes him as. And, like the Biblical Satan, it does unspeakable things to get a reaction from the “God” figure. In this story, he kills Frankenstein’s friends and family. In Paradise Lost Satan destroys Adam and Eve a different way. He tricks Eve into eating the forbidden fruit, an apple, knowing that she’d be cast out of Eden. Once this event took place, Adam and Eve became mortal, meaning that, eventually, they’d die. So in essence, Satan killed them in a response to his casting out of Heaven. As both the Bible and Milton show, Satan begins to thrive in this “Hell”. And Shelley’s Satan figure, the creation, also does quite well in his miserable hovels in the mountains of Germany and Switzerland.

Working from the need of a Satan figure in a novel that forwards Paradise Lost, Shelley may have used Victor to represent Satan instead of the creature. As mentioned above, Victor is also playing God’s role, though he is far from the God that is in the Bible. There are several ways that Shelley represents that Frankenstein is either figure. The first is how he created the creature in his own image. As the creature is both Adam and Satan it is safe to say that Victor is both God and Satan. The reasoning behind Victor being God has been discussed, with his creation of life. As mentioned previously, Victor cannot actually be God. He simply plays his role. And, like God, he faces a rival of his own making in a sense. In Milton’s work, Satan serves as God’s mortal rival. While he is a rival in Heaven, his being cast into Hell surely made him even more of a threat. In Victor’s case, casting out his creation, his own son in theory, made him an enemy. To add to the threat, the destruction of his partner made the creation into Victor’s mortal enemy and an eternal battle, or at least one as long as life, was to take place.
As for the aspect of him being Satan, Victor became the devil. This brings us to the issue that perhaps God and Satan are one and the same, as Victor is both. However, due to the complexities of this argument, it will remain untouched. Victor can be the Satan figure, corrupting the innocent Adam, and creating a less savoury being in his place. Or one can look at how Victor started out good, trying to create life to bring his mother back, as is implied, never stated; and then suffered a downfall, his exile from Heaven, and became a monster himself. The second idea is more logical and will be treated as the reason for why Frankenstein may be Satan. He starts out, as previously stated, a good person. The reasoning behind his creation of life is never stated but it is implied that he may want to bring his mother back from the dead. His downfall occurs when he sets about his task of creation. When he does this, it represents his challenge to God, as he tries to become just as powerful as Him. As mentioned earlier, the quote from page fifty three, where Victor says he is going to achieve new levels, supports this. By saying how he will go where no man has gone before, he is saying that he is above man and that he is treading on materials that aren’t meant for mortal men. This is almost like Victor being subtle while directly challenging God.  Satan says in Milton’s work: “…better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.” To me, as the reader, this is Satan’s challenge to the Lord’s authority. Victor lives in a self created Hell and it seems that he’d rather defy the laws of nature and of God than just accept them. Victor creates life as only the Omnipotent could, and makes himself rival God in power, perhaps even making a statement that he is more powerful than the Lord. In turn, Victor is cast from his proverbial Heaven. This downfall is when Victor’s loved ones start to suffer the wrath of the creation. In the end, Victor is left dejected and monstrous, setting his life upon the destruction of his creation. In Milton’s book, Satan dedicates his life to trying to extract his revenge upon God, playing the theory that perhaps the monster is God. An interesting theory no doubt.

There is no correct answer to this problem. This is partially why Mary Shelley’s work is still being discussed and analyzed to this day. No one is able to figure out who is the God figure and who is Satan. Likewise, there are many other characters from other novels referenced and alluded to that they could be instead. The whole story it can be argued, as based on the supporting evidence from the above argument, is a forwarding of both the Bible and Paradise Lost. As mentioned earlier, forwarding is the act of taking one writer’s work and putting it into your own words, with your own twist and analysis of it. In this case, Shelley took two great religious books and changed the story into her own interpretation of it. By simply changing the character’s names and story slightly, she retold Genesis in her own unique manner. She may have had strong religious opinions and this was her way to safely express them without simply questioning who is God and who is Satan. She may even have been implying that God and Satan are the same or that they can be interchangeable, as can be seen when Victor and the creation switch roles of who plays Satan’s figure. And Shelley works these plots into her story. She puts a story within a story and lets the reader do the work of unravelling the various scenarios. A major theme of this novel is confusion and chaos and by writing in this twisting and unclear manner she is able to create this illusion. This way she intentionally incorporates famous works into her story for a result that can be read to this day. And by forwarding her opinions, she is able to create debates, discussions, interpretations, and also, allow herself to be published by the stricter Victorian censors. Part of the reason this story lives on to this day is because it is more than just a monster story, it is a complex and confusing work that leaves the reader trying to decipher the work for themselves.

Recently, for an English class, I read a new form of literature. This so called “literature” is different than most. For one, it’s only available online. This literature of which I speak is a hypertext. The hypertext in question is called “The Museum” by Adam Kenney. There are many critics of this form of literature. Maybe form is the wrong word, medium being more accurate as it is a completely different format. Some of the more vocal critics of this new medium and it’s impact on society are Sven Birkerts and Nicholas Carr. Both of these men have opinions that I agree with for the most part in terms of literature’s future. That said, Birkerts is too extremist for me whereas Carr is much milder and seems to share some of the same sentiments as me. They also discuss online media in general and society’s fate that awaits for rushing seemingly headlong into it’s digital embrace. While I feel that they are correct on many points, especially regarding hyperlinks, I must also question them on several things, including creativity and the experience of reading literature that is presented in a new medium.
“The Museum” is an interesting piece. For one, it is unlike other things I have read in the past. While it is true that I have limited experience with hypertexts, and therefore claim no expertise on them, I feel that they are all different from what comes to mind when one thinks of literature. I’ve seen several hyperlinks that I feel don’t even deserve the term “literature” as they are more expressive and resemble art for a lack of better words. But, I found “The Museum” to be rather similar to literature. It can be read, like a book can, and there are “pages” or more accurately separate hyperlinks. It is also about a museum, and makes that fact very clear.
To first discuss “The Museum” I’ll use the parts of Birkerts argument that I agreed with. As Birkerts describes hypertexts as being maze-like or as he says: “map of an elaborate garden”. I agree with this. Scrolling through “The Museum” is an intricate project. For one, it’s non-linear. A book is something straightforward. You open it, read it and when you read it, it’s read in a linear manner. A hypertext is read in no particular order. For one, including “The Museum”, there isn’t a specific order. “The Museum” has a basic storyline that allows for you to go in a semi-linear order. However, to experience the museum as the author, or creator, intended, one must click the many hyperlinks on the page. These in turn transport you to another separate page and these pages often contain hyperlinks of their own. Reading it in this manner makes it more engaging, but far from linear. I read through the page in the “South Wing” and followed a link that took me to one of the exhibits. Then, following another link on that new page, I was transported to an unrelated page and ended up on the other side of the museum, before even seeing all there was to see in the “South Wing”. A book would never allow for this to happen. What I’m saying is, while there are certainly tangents in a book, they are all tied into the main argument. This is not the case in the extremely tangental and rather confusing jumble that is a hypertext. Birkerts talks about this. He says that the words that you click on, the hyperlinks, lose meaning, or change meaning, unlike the “stationary” words that are inside a traditional novel. This is true. Had you read a book and come across a word, maybe the author would have explained it’s significance. But in a hypertext, you click on it and end up being taken to an unrelated separate area. This makes the original concept lose some of it’s importance and diverts your attention to something that may not be as important or significant. Birkerts, as previously mentioned, uses the term “map”. This map that he speaks of is actually in the hypertext. In “The Museum” there is a map that allows for you as reader to click on a place and be transported there, further destroying any linear reading pattern. One can completely lose themselves as to what is going on because they are busy taking random and unconnected side roads. This is one problem. Another problem is knowing if you’ve fully experienced it. While a traditional novel may be interpreted differently than how the author intended, one certainly knows that they are done reading the novel and that they have been able to read everything there was to read. A hypertext is not like this. Because you aren’t reading anything in order, one never knows when they get to the end. Is it a perpetual loop? I had to wonder myself, upon finishing reading “The Museum” if I actually had finished the article. I had no way of knowing if, by following a link, I had made it to the end. Or, because I chose my own route, something books don’t allow for, I was unsure if I ended where the author had intended originally. This makes gleaning information from a reading rather hard. For one, you cannot simply understand what is being read the same as someone else because you don’t know if you read the piece in the same order. If I were to follow one set of links, and someone else another, we may well have read two different books as the ideas and story would be vastly different. And, as I mentioned earlier, you are in control. This interactivity makes a hyperlink different from a novel where the author shows you where to go. In this you run the show completely, almost nullifying the author’s job as he can’t shape your reading.
One thing I disagree with Birkerts on is when he completely writes off modern technology. I feel that he is being far too extreme by not even acknowledging that there is another side, and never once considering that they may have some accurate points. His use of the term “devil” also is problematic as it is a serious accusation. His biggest flaw though, is when he contradicts himself. He starts by calling books visible versus the “invisible” hypertext. He then reverses this, leaving his argument invalid as he contradicts himself to a point that it’s nullified. He also states that expression is declining as people get used to hypertexts. I wonder how he can say this when hypertexts range from a piece like “The Museum” to a series of colors moving gently across a screen. If anything, the book is less expressive. That said, in terms of literary expressiveness, the book trumps a hypertext as there is more imagery and work put into the word choice. Perhaps, if he had elaborated on this point, this is what Birkerts meant.
Carr has a different approach. His approach is similar to calling us apathetic towards the changes occurring around us. He talks about how we are changing in the way we think. His argument is that digital media is dumbing us down. We are starting to think more like a computer and we allow for this to happen. Birkerts also says something similar in that we don’t care about the written word anymore. For one, he says that we seek total control over what we read. This means that we disregard the author and that we read it how we want to. That, in my opinion, is incorrect. Had someone not wanted to read, or was against literature, they wouldn’t take the time to sort through the complex and weaving scenarios that make up hypertexts.
One thing that Carr and Birkerts both say is that we are still reading but we aren’t thinking. Carr says that we allow for the digital media to solve simple problems for us and that we allow robots to do the work that we were once able to do ourselves. Birkerts talks about how we read without actually paying attention to what is written. Both of these can be seen in “The Museum”. Carr’s argument can be seen when we allow for the author to tell us what to look at in the museum, instead of choosing where we want to go and what we want to see ourselves. This is only true if you go along with the author however. And with Birkerts I’d have to agree. From personal experience, at one point I just skimmed over the words and later realized I had no idea what I had just read. Perhaps it was because the medium confused and bored me and as a response I stopped reading it.
Carr’s main argument is that we are developing shorter and shorter attention spans and we can’t seem to make it through texts of any length due to the availability of soundbites and clips that are permeating the internet. He says, as does Birkerts, that our creativity is affected by this. This is where I’d have to disagree with Carr. Carr’s point may be valid that we are becoming more detached and less interested. This is where I feel that “The Museum” and other hyperlinks can refute the theory that we are less creative and that having a shorter attention span is a bad thing. For one, “The Museum” is an original idea, proof that creativity still exists. Someone was inspired by a trip to a museum as a child perhaps and created a story based off of this, even creating their own exhibits based off of what they are interested in. And in terms of short attention spans, the fact that people would be able to sit through a complex narrative to find out the ending, after taking hours of exploring different routes to get there, refutes this. And even if there are shorter attention spans, the tangential paths to explore can surely help. By the time someone gets bored they are at another link, seeing something different. Also, by being tangential, it allows for poor writers to create a work of which they can get away with steering from the point. They can go off on tangents by means of the hyperlinks which they put through as they see fit. Finally, it gives an experience that books can’t. I feel that a book, despite it’s many wonders and emotions, can’t give the same experience that a hyperlink can. “The Museum” allows for you to go off on a journey through a museum as if you were really there, wandering it’s vast corridors and looking at it’s exhibits.
Then again, a good work of literature should be able to give you this experience. The author should be able to blend and weave words to create graphic imagery that allows for the reader to see what he wants. And, even better, his tangents are tied in, leaving the reader less confused and more focused on the main argument. Also, if they are good writers they’ll be able to entrap the reader’s attention, no matter how bad it may be.
This is just a simple counter argument. I feel that the creative aspect listed above is one of the only benefits of this hypermediated form of literature. The other problems with it, in my opinion, as well as those of Carr and Birkerts, have been listed above.
I feel, though not completely, that Birkerts and Carr were correct. I lean in favor of their argument for the most part. There is a certain creative and experiential aspect of hyperlinks that make me feel like they aren’t completely correct. I also have to question Birkert’s blatant disregard for the rules of debate, that is to hear the other side out. Carr seems more moderate because he questions himself, as anyone who is starting a debate should. But, as much as I’d like to a take a neutral stance on the advent of a digital age, I feel that it is negative for the most part in terms of literature’s future. I, however, haven’t read as many cases that support this change and therefore may be biased.  Perhaps, had I seen more on the matter in terms of benefits of a digital age I’d have taken a different stance. I have not seen anything so far that is significant enough that I’d change my answer. For all intents and purposes, I believe that the onset of digital media will be the end of the book and hyperlinks are representative of the demise of literature.

Sven Birkerts’ book The Gutenberg Elegies is an opinion piece about how the electronic and digital age will be the downfall of the printed word, namely, the book. Birkerts blames the rise of the computer for the destruction and disregard for the paper novel. Birkerts takes a rather extreme view, with people like Carr who takes a more moderate approach to the dawn of the digital or electronic age. On a personal note, I feel that Carr, a moderate who has no determined standpoint, is the one who is most accurate in what lies in store for us as we rush headlong into the digital era. That said, Birkerts has some points that I find to be valid, especially regarding hyperlinks. But ultimately, I feel that the advent of a digital era is neither positive or negative, for reasons that I will explain in the following paragraphs. Firstly, I’d like to argue against Birkerts. Most of his book seems a bit extreme to me. This may be due to the fact that he is incredibly one sided and, when he rarely acknowledges the other side, he usually doesn’t even bother talking about it. What good argument doesn’t even address the other side’s perspective? A simple rule of a debate is to refute the other side. Birkerts fails to even address the fact that there are those who don’t agree with his opinion. On occasion he will question if he is being too critical. He quickly dismisses this thought, as one would shoo away a stray cat. He says, to paraphrase, “of course I’m not wrong”, as if he is some sort of egotistical genius. This blatant one-sidedness made me have to question the accuracy of his argument. I figured that anyone who could be so certain in himself was someone who wouldn’t be able to see reason. The final reason why I disagree with Birkerts is his last paragraph. Birkerts, I feel, lost all his credibility in his final concluding chapter. Any redeeming hope for him was squandered when he typed out his final chapter on a typewriter, refusing to modernize and use a word processor. It’s not that his final chapter is a new thought that is inherently bad, but rather, his word choice is what ruins it for him. He makes the mistake of calling the acceptance of a change in technology a “faustian pact”. That is to say, in layman’s terms, that he is calling all digital media the devil and that we are signing our souls away to a proverbial Lucifer by accepting the changes in technology. His last paragraph represents the failure of his argument. To quote him: The devil no longer moves about on cloven hooves, reeking of brimstone. He is an affable, efficient fellow. He claims to want to all along to a brighter, easier future, and his sales pitch is very smooth. I was, as the old song goes, almost persuaded. I saw what it could be like, our toil and misery replaced by a vivid, pleasant dream. Fingers tap keys, oceans of fact and sensation get downloaded, are dissolved through the nervous system. Bottomless wells of data are accessed and manipulated, everything flowing at circuit speed. Gone the rock in the field, the broken hoe, the grueling distances. “History,” said Stephen Dedalus, “is a nightmare from which I’m trying to awaken.” This may be the awakening, but it feels curiously like the fantasies that circulate through our sleep. From deep in the heart I hear the voice that says, “Refuse it.” This argument, his imagery, wording, all woven together to create a strong image laden point, actually lead to his failure as a debater. To call something the “Devil” one must really truly believe that it is evil. A comparison to a term that is synonymous with evil is something that one does not do lightly. Birkerts at this fatal moment seals his arguments’ lack of validity by not leaving any room for debate. And, as my opinion, as well as that of many others living in the digital age differ from his, he has placed himself against a wall and can’t back out of it. As I said earlier, a good argument puts things into both perspectives. I will now share what I agree with from the argument by Birkerts. Hypertext is a medium and by product of a digital age that I feel Birkerts was accurate in disregarding it as a legitimate form of literature. For one thing, literature, to me, is linear. A book is rather straightforward. You open it, read it, and you read it in a linear manner. It is designed to be read in that manner. You can control what you read, simply by stopping when you don’t want to read anymore. That said, you read it only in a linear order as it may not make sense otherwise. The author controls what is read, simply by making it hard to understand if it’s read in an order that differs from the linear manner. Also, you know when you are done. The book ends and therefore, intuitively, you know that you have read all that the author has intended for you to read. A hypertext is not like this. In fact, a hypertext doesn’t have most of these factors. They are (not all but a majority for the purposes of argument ) non-linear. You read it straight through. Or at least you attempt to. That is to say, you must avoid all the other links that transport you to a related, or unrelated, separate page. This page in turn can’t be read in full because in most cases you have more little trails to follow. There is no linear manner in which to read a hypertext. Or at least, you cannot read it in the manner intended by the author if it’s read like one would read a novel. Another thing that makes hypertexts different is that, because of the multi faceted approach that is taken by reading the branching but not necessarily connected links, one doesn’t know when they are done. Have you read everything? Is this the manner in which the author wanted you to read it? It seems like it will never end as there is a seemingly infinite number of ways to read a hyperlinked text. One of the texts I’ve read, “The Museum” is like this. It starts out in linear manner. But, it gives you complete control over what is read. In it there is a map, you can go anywhere in the museum, even if the author suggests that you go wing by wing. And, while in the wings of the museum there are several other links that tell about what you are seeing. Clicking these sends you to other links which may be connected to more branching links. It is because of this complicated and tangled web that you as a reader are unsure if you have read everything that you were given to read. And because of the interactivity you are given control. I literature as an educational tool in this case and a hyperlink as a kind of tool for teaching where the students are put in charge. But if the student is given control what purpose does the teacher serve? It is because of the complexities that I don’t think hyperlinks are good educational tools, nor do I consider them to be literature. They are simply interactive media, perhaps ideal for those with short attention spans. Another thing I can agree with Birkerts on is that he considers the new age to be an age of apathy. This is true. I feel that people are apathetic towards literature if they consider hypertexts to be such. For one, they don’t care what the author created. They want total control and don’t have any care whatsoever for the author’s direction. I feel that people who read literature in it’s truest form do in fact care. They want the author to take them on a certain path. By clicking around on a screen generated image, hyperlinks, the reader disregards the rules of standard literature and creates a story of their own. In that regard, it can be argued that hyperlinks stimulate creativity as the reader chooses their own paths and endings, weaving the story in whatever way they choose. But this isn’t what I’m talking about. If I was talking about art this would be a successful counter argument. I’m talking about the points that Birkerts made that are able to be agreed with. Carr is someone whose approach is less extreme and easier to listen to. His argument is that Google is making us dumber. That said, he ends by saying, and I quote, “So, yes, you should be skeptical of my skepticism”. This, unlike Birkerts, shows that he is willing to second guess himself, and by saying this shows that he may not be right and allows for room to debate him. This instantly makes his style more attractive as it’s almost inviting you to question his argument, whereas Birkerts is almost militant in his thoughts and you want nothing to do with it. Carr argues that Google has changed the way our thought processes work. He states that we are having our thoughts replaced by a computer almost. He is saying that Google is replacing our brains with it’s advanced tools. He says that we will start to think like a computer. He also states that Google and the internet has led to humans having lower attention spans. He says the consolidation of information into small bytes and clips allows for our minds to grow accustomed to smaller doses of content and therefore can’t focus for as long. I disagree that Google will replace our minds, because people use Google to answer their questions and to do research. It is a valuable tool and Carr even agrees with this. He sees where it can serve as a tool that is beneficial. I do agree, however, that we are relying too heavily on technology. Sometimes we will use it because it is available and as a means to support our laziness, solving problems easily solved mentally. In terms of literature the only valid point that would show the internet’s negative effects is on the attention span. I personally agree that modern media has led to a shorter attention span and has created a generation of ADD or shorter attention spanned youth. That said, I had no trouble reading this rather lengthy article, nor any other articles. But, there are times when I feel that this is true. For one, with the availability of short clips and sound bites, I don’t see or feel the need to view a full length broadcast or media piece. And I think that hyperlinks support this idea too. For one, his theory is that we can’t hold onto a thought. And, a hyperlink allows for the mind to wander on a tangent when you click a link and follow it on an unrelated path. Literature, in the form it was intended to be in (non electronic) is not forgiving to short attention spans. It is to be followed and kept up with. The hyperlink allows for one to follow any random tangent that the author went off on. That said, it can be argued that hyperlinks are an acceptable form of authorship for those who have wandering minds. This way they can present a case in a straight forward manner and yet still have room to go off on tangents, albeit on a separate page. It is for these reasons that I feel that literature is neither thriving nor hurting in the digital age. There is simply too many arguments for and against electronic mediums to make an educated decision. While I feel that hyperlinks are not literature, I also feel that literature in the traditional sense will remain standard and unscathed by the influx of electronic media. And I also don’t have any stance on the effect of digital media on us as humans. It has benefits surely, but then again it seems to have some rather negative effects. Regardless, this debate will surely remain strong for as long as literature still exists and modernity doesn’t stop.

The hypertext is arguably the future of literature. Story telling began orally, moved to printed words on a page, and now is found more and more on the online world of the internet. Birkerts fears the increase of online texts and warns of the repercussions of using them. I’ve used hypertext increasingly, as inevitable in this wired age that we live in, and I’ve started to question the idea of hypertext taking over written word. For one, there are many available online texts. Instead of going through a series of hypertexts, one can read on a page online. This is a straightforward way to read, instead of scrolling through a series of hyperlinks.

Hyperlinks, in my opinion, should be distinguished from online texts. This is because, frankly, they are nothing the alike. Hyperlinks are a series of interconnected texts that don’t have to relate to each other. You can click a link and be taken off on a tangent that may or may not support the argument. Good writing doesn’t go on tangents without tying them in. Hyperlinks allows them to go off on a tangent and not tie it in. Also, unlike an online text, a hyperlink can be a video or image that has words included.

The final difference between hyperlinks and online texts is that an online text is  similar to a printed text in that it can only be read from one way. A hyperlink puts the reader in control. While they can’t alter the words that are created, they can read it from several ways. A reader can follow a link and be taken off to another part of the reading. Or they can use a map feature, like in “The Museum”. This is a story that can be read in linear order, like a normal work, or can be read out of order. Each way gives the story a different take as it’s not being read in any order. One problem with this way of reading is that the reader is never sure when they are done. Also, it changes the reading experience. Because of the randomness and the non linear method of reading, the story can’t be appreciated in the same manner as a regular work. The author of a linear reading story can have his work interpreted in a manner that they choose based on the order of the story. As soon as the story is told out of order, the author’s message can be shifted and changed in a manner that may not have been intended by the author.

It is for these reasons that hyperlinks differ from the regular online texts. It is also for this reason that people like Birkerts don’t like online texts. Hyperlinks change the way reading is done. If his argument was that hyperlinks were the downfall of the printed word, it would be understandable. But because he attacks all online media I can’t agree with him. But it is for the reasons listed above why I think that hyperlinks are not part related to, and shouldn’t be considered an online text.

There are several arguments against computers made by various authors. Naturally, like any argument, there are also several that support computers, at least in some manner. Sven Birkerts is a vocal opponent of the digital age and is convinced that the computer is going to lead to the destruction of the printed or written word. I feel, for the sake of my argument, that McLuhan, another author against modern media, and Carr, both for and against (mostly the latter) new technology, would be most beneficial for the paper I’d do. Birkerts and Murray are too vocal in their opinions and they are, frankly, too one sided. They don’t present a proper argument in my opinion as they gloss over the other side. This makes them sound less informed. 

The other two authors, through both their works and their arguments, are able to support my position. I think I’m going to take the stance that media is destroying the written word. That said, I plan to incorporate the arguments of Birkerts and Murray into mine to support my point. In a way, I’ll be doing what Harris recommended when he spoke about the way to do a proper argument. And, like Carr, I will even admit that the other side does have some valid points, and then prove them to be wrong. 

The paper should be interesting as there are so many ways I can go. In fact, I may explain this in the paper and then from there raise two or three points that I find to be most “valid”. And I figure that with the support of two works, and two who’s argument I can shift or tear apart to prove mine, that my argument will be effective.

Marshall McLuhan offers an unconventional argument in his book The Medium Is The Massage. Then again, the book itself is unconventional. For one, a majority of the book consists of pictures, quotations and images that are combined with various sayings or words. Frankly, I found this medium confusing. That said, I believe that McLuhan actually wanted to make it seem rather choppy and confusing. I feel he uses this best when he argues about the “television generation”.

This “television generation”, a term coined in the sixties when the book was written, described the youth of the time (the “baby boomers”) who, unlike previous generations, grew up with a television in their home. These kids were exposed early on to a barrage of images and sounds. McLuhan’s main argument is that watching television’s never ending images flash by doesn’t allow for the children to ponder and deeply think about the message. Unlike a book, that can be put down and deciphered mentally, like this one has been, television doesn’t stop and therefore the children are only able to form incomplete thoughts.

Another issue with television is that it gives the viewer a sensory overload. We as humans are not meant to be engulfed in a steady torrent of changing mediums. Lights, sounds, images all flash by in a TV program. That would never happen in a real life setting, unless there were unusual events occurring, like an eruption.

This whole book is short and choppy. I believe it is actually McLuhan’s interpretation and response to television. He makes a series of short flashy arguments and they are permeated with random assortments of phrases and images that flash by as the book is read. I interpret this as McLuhan creating a television like experience. Unlike TV, you can go back and re-read. But I feel that his TV generation argument is strong when he uses this medium. He proves how a series of rapid fire images and words and information can create confusion and then leave the reader with an incomplete and quickly thought of interpretation of what was presented. And, like television, the reader, or viewer, is unable to think about what was presented because it skips along to a new scene.

In that regard the book was very effective. I feel that McLuhan created a very strong argument by displaying it in a way that proves it’s validity. That said, I found the medium rather distasteful. Though, admittedly, I was impressed by the new medium. I also thought that, while hard to adapt to, it was interesting to see things from a fresh (despite the fact that the book is over 50 years old) view and a rather unusual manner. Despite the flaws of creating a complicated and bizarrely twisting argument, the book leaves one thinking, mostly to interpret what was read. And this is something that any good argument should do to the reader. So, in that sense, McLuhan was very successful in his argument and created a strong albeit abnormal presentation for it.

Brian Selznick’s The Invention of Hugo Cabret is an interesting book for the fact that it is told as if it’s a film. His book weaves both still images and words together to form a medley that is rarely seen in books. The story is told both through the images and through the words, blended perfectly. The story, in a nutshell, is about an orphan named Hugo living in a Paris train station in the 1930′s. He repairs a machine with a secret and ends up living a happy life with an actual family. It is, after all, a children’s story, albeit a complex one.

A major theme in the novel is film, particularly early film. While film has mild overtones in the beginning of the novel, it features heavily in the end. What makes this interesting is that the story, the book rather, is like a film as well. 

Using a ratio of about 50/50 words to pictures, Hugo’s tale is told. Like the old silent films that are featured in the story, the book contains many images that form a story that are suddenly interrupted by words. Like the old silents, the images will be there and then a white page with a black border will appear with only a few words to represent dialogue and to give important and pertinent information that leads to the story’s conclusion and gives the story it’s emotions and textural draw. Without the words the reader wouldn’t be able to appreciate the complexity of the story, though it could be argued that the story’s plot would still be easily followed. However, to make it interesting and keep the audience’s attention, Selznick included a riveting story. 

It resembles film, and it plays out like a film with choppy editing for the “action scenes” and with the panoramic close ups that would rival a Ken Burn’s film (after all, it is called the Ken Burn’s effect). The story is about movies and is, as mentioned before a silent film. While it doesn’t actually move, the images can be flipped, pages rather, to create a moving scene. Also, there is no piano or parlor music in the background. But, for the sake of the argument, the story is panned out like an old silent to an effect that leaves a lasting impression.

There may be reasons why author’s choose not to use this medium. I’m not here to discuss these reasons and I feel that Selznick has effectively created what may catch on as a popular medium in the future. HIs book is about movies and his book, while not projected, is very much a silent film in hard copy.

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